Instead, I'm going to share poems from the poetry class I'm taking this year. I'm in a poetry seminar (seminar meaning there's only eleven of us and we sit around a table and discuss stuff as our class time) called "Eco Poetry," in which we work on reading and writing poems about the natural world, as well as researching and learning stuff about the environment. It's really fun and I could talk a lot about the stuff I've learned from the class and from the other students, but instead I'm just going to share some of the poetry I have written for the class.
All of the poems are about nature. I mostly liked to focus on the seasons, which is my topic for my conference project (which is an individual research project we do alongside each class at my college). I picked my favorites, so I hope you like them. Feel free to leave feedback/criticism in the comments!
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Autumn
(the prompt was "write a letter to autumn")
I
saw you in the woods again,
running
and laughing with your girlfriend Color.
How
little you seem to think
of
the creatures in the forest beneath you,
as
you force the leaves
to
bleed ‘til they dry
and
make the forest a beautiful grave.
And
why am I so taken by you?
You
spin a waltz of fiercely blue skies,
with
a cackling smile, so warm.
Your
arms flail,
and
make the wind storm.
Why
do your months make my lungs rise up?
Like
the beauty of earth
Turned
furiously wild?
Papery
leaves careening in the wind
And
birds fleeing on the spine of day?
How to Survive the Winter(the prompt was to write a poem of instruction)
First,
prepare.
Outside,
colors surround you.
Inside,
turning to steel.
Spend
your days
gathering.
Each
tree is a feast for the taking,
but
not for now-
do
not think you can get away
with
an extra nut or two today.
Hide
everything you can
in
your hoards, in the trees.
Work
now, or starve.
There
are thieves.
Even
your brothers are thieves.
You
must work alone.
You
must work against the world.
Build
a nest.
Steal
leaves as you have stolen nuts.
Shiver.
Anatomy of a Blizzard
(the prompt was to write a poem about the coming blizzard)
Unlike
most animals,
a
blizzard doesn’t have a heart.
But
it does have a mouth-
the
whole sky,
squeezing
and vomiting and crying.
It
just lets go-
leaves
all its mess
for
the earth to deal with.
A
blizzard hurts.
Torn
from what it used to be:
rivers,
lakes, mountain streams.
Now
heavy, in the sky- cold, frozen, and alone.
No
wonder it whirls,
crashes,
and shrieks.
A
blizzard is proof that hearts
are
not necessary for despair.
Hoarfrost
(this is from my conference project about the seasons)
In
the summer we form
when
the earth- cool with morning-
takes
us liquid from the air.
But
it is cold now.
We
lock into place, crystalline,
thick
over each frozen surface.
We
were water.
We
were vapor.
We
are ice.
We
are too cold
to dream.
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I hope you liked these poems! I plan for my new experience this week to be related to this poetry class, so this is just going to be a week of poetry for my blog. :)
Thanks so much for reading. Now I'm finally going to go watch the Parks and Rec finale.
I'll see you Saturday,
-Ariel
"You spin a waltz of fiercely blue skies," - I loved this. Also, I loved the point of view of the squirrel in how to survive. But it won't make me hate these creatures less...
ReplyDeleteAriel, your poetry is beautiful! Wow! You're really good at this. <3
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting poetry. I see my whining works.
ReplyDeleteLove, love, love the autumn poem (naturally).
What I like the most about your poetry is how evocative it is. I can FEEL the squirrel shivering, the blizzard's despair and the cold in the last one. I believe that's the sign of really excellent poetry.
And I truly enjoy this blog. Thanks for writing it.
Dear Ariel,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reding your poems, I liked specially the poem about autumn.
Enjoy your poetry seminar.
Vida
Autumn is my new favorite thing like, ever.
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